Typo fixes for A Space Adventure campaign
authorWuzzy <almikes@aol.com>
Wed, 13 Apr 2016 14:59:14 +0200
changeset 11692 68eddcdc9f26
parent 11646 42d7f5dbd8dc
child 11693 989b2d54bed3
Typo fixes for A Space Adventure campaign Also add loc() where forgotten and replace string concatenation with string.format.
share/hedgewars/Data/Locale/campaigns_en.txt
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/cosmos.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death01.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death02.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert01.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert02.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert03.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/final.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit01.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit02.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit03.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice01.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice02.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua
share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon02.lua
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Locale/campaigns_en.txt	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Locale/campaigns_en.txt	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -19,16 +19,16 @@
 A_Classic_Fairytale-epil.desc="Congratulations! Leaks a lot can finally leave in peace and get praised by his new friends and his tribe. Be proud for what you succeed! You can play again previous missions and see the other possible endings."
 
 A_Space_Adventure-cosmos.desc="Hogera, the planet of hogs is about to be hit by a gigantic meteorite. In this race for survival you have to lead PAotH's best pilot, Hog Solo, in a space trip around the neighbor planets to collect all the 4 pieces of the long lost anti gravity device!"
-A_Space_Adventure-moon01.desc="Hog Solo has landed on the moon to refuel his saucer but professor Hogevil has gone there first and set an ambush! Rescue the captured PAotH researchers and drive professor Hogevil away!"
-A_Space_Adventure-moon02.desc="Hog Solo visits an hermit, old PAotH veteran, who lives in moon in order to gather some intel about Pr. Hogevil. However, he has to beat the hermit, Soneek the Crazy Runner, in a chase game first!"
+A_Space_Adventure-moon01.desc="Hog Solo has landed on the moon to refuel his saucer but professor Hogevil has gone there first and set an ambush! Rescue the captured PAotH researchers and drive Professor Hogevil away!"
+A_Space_Adventure-moon02.desc="Hog Solo visits an hermit, old PAotH veteran, who lives on the moon in order to gather some intel about Prof. Hogevil. However, he has to beat the hermit, Soneek the Crazy Runner, in a chase game first!"
 A_Space_Adventure-ice01.desc="Welcome to the planet of ice. Here, it's so cold that most of Hog Solo's weapons won't work. You have to get the lost part from the bandit leader Thanta using the weapons that you'll find there!"
-A_Space_Adventure-ice02.desc="Hog Solo couldn't just visit the Ice Planet without visiting the Olympic stadium of saucer flying! In this mission you can prove your flying skills and claim your place between the best!"
+A_Space_Adventure-ice02.desc="Hog Solo couldn't just visit the Ice Planet without visiting the Olympic Stadium of Saucer Flying! In this mission you can prove your flying skills and claim your place among the best!"
 A_Space_Adventure-desert01.desc="You have landed to the planet of sand! Hog Solo has to find the missing part in the underground tunnels. Be careful as vicious smugglers await to attack and rob you!"
 A_Space_Adventure-desert02.desc="Hog Solo was searching for the part in this tunnel when it unexpectedly start getting flooded! Get to the surface as soon as possible and be careful not to trigger a mine."
 A_Space_Adventure-desert03.desc="Hog Solo has some time to fly his RC plane and have some fun. Fly the RC plane and hit all the targets!"
 A_Space_Adventure-fruit01.desc="In the fruit planet things aren't going so well. Hogs aren't collecting fruits but they are preparing for battle. You'll have to choose if you'll fight or if you'll flee."
-A_Space_Adventure-fruit02.desc="Hog Solo gets closer to the lost part in the Fruit Planet. Will Captain Lime help him acquire the part or not?"
-A_Space_Adventure-fruit03.desc="Hog Solo got lost and got ambushed by the Red Strawberries. Help him eliminate them and win some extra ammo for the Getting to the device mission."
-A_Space_Adventure-death01.desc="In the Death Planet, the most infertile planet around, Hog Solo is very close to get the last part of the device! However an unpleasant surprise awaits him..."
-A_Space_Adventure-death02.desc="Again Hog Solo has got himself in a difficult situation. Help him defeat the “5 deadly hogs“ in their own game!"
+A_Space_Adventure-fruit02.desc="Hog Solo gets closer to the lost part on the Fruit Planet. Will Captain Lime help him acquire the part or not?"
+A_Space_Adventure-fruit03.desc="Hog Solo got lost and got ambushed by the Red Strawberries. Help him eliminate them and win some extra ammo for the mission “Getting to the device”."
+A_Space_Adventure-death01.desc="On the Death Planet, the most infertile planet around, Hog Solo is very close to get the last part of the device! However, an unpleasant surprise awaits him ..."
+A_Space_Adventure-death02.desc="Again Hog Solo has got himself in a difficult situation. Help him defeat the “5 Deadly Hogs“ in their own game!"
 A_Space_Adventure-final.desc="Hog Solo has to detonate some explosives that have been placed on the meteorite. Help him complete his mission without getting hurt!"
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/cosmos.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/cosmos.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 director.name = loc("H")
 director.x = 1350
 director.y = 1550
-doctor.name = loc("Dr.Cornelius")
+doctor.name = loc("Dr. Cornelius")
 doctor.x = 1300
 doctor.y = 1550
 guard1.name = loc("Bob")
@@ -362,10 +362,10 @@
 	if checkPointReached == 1 then
 		-- player climbed the moon with rope
 		FollowGear(doctor.gear)
-		AnimSay(doctor.gear, loc("One cannot simply walk in moon with rope!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
+		AnimSay(doctor.gear, loc("One does not simply rope to the moon!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
 		SendStat(siGameResult, loc("This is the wrong way!"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Collect the crate with the flying saucer"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Fly to the moon"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Collect the crate with the flying saucer!"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Fly to the moon."))
 		SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 		EndGame()
 	else
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission1", "2")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "13")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission3", "1")
-		sendStats(loc("the moon"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the moon!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@
 			SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "10")
 			SaveCampaignVar("Mission3", "1")
 		end
-		sendStats(loc("the Fruit Planet"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the Fruit Planet!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "7")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission3", "12")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission4", "1")
-		sendStats(loc("the Desert Planet"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the Desert Planet!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission1", "5")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "6")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission3", "1")
-		sendStats(loc("the Ice Planet"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the Ice Planet!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission1", "9")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "11")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission3", "1")
-		sendStats(loc("the Planet of Death"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the Planet of Death!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
 		SaveCampaignVar("UnlockedMissions", "2")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission1", "14")
 		SaveCampaignVar("Mission2", "1")
-		sendStats(loc("the meteorite"))
+		sendStats(loc("Hog Solo arrived at the meteorite!"))
 	end
 end
 
@@ -522,23 +522,23 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {doctor.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near secret base 17 of PAotH in the rural Hogland..."),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("So Hog Solo, here we are..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Behind these trees on the east side there is secret base 17"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near Secret Base 17 of PAotH in the rural Hogland ..."),  4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("So Hog Solo, here we are ..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Behind these trees on the east side there is Secret Base 17."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("You have to continue alone from now on."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Be careful, the future of Hogera is in your hands!"), SAY_SAY, 7200}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("We'll use our communicators to contact you"), SAY_SAY, 2600}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("In am also entrusting you with some rope"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("You may find it handy"), SAY_SAY, 2300}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Thank you Dr.Cornelius"), SAY_SAY, 1600}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I'll make good use of it"), SAY_SAY, 4500}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("It would be wiser to steal the space ship while PAotH guards are taking a brake!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("We'll use our communicators to contact you."), SAY_SAY, 2600}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("In am also entrusting you with some rope."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("You may find it handy."), SAY_SAY, 2300}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Thank you, Dr. Cornelius."), SAY_SAY, 1600}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I'll make good use of it."), SAY_SAY, 4500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("It would be wiser to steal the space ship while the PAotH guards are taking a brake!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Remember! Many will seek the anti-gravity device! Now go, hurry up!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - Hero got the saucer
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("CheckPoint reached!"),  4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Checkpoint reached!"),  4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Got the saucer!"), SAY_SHOUT, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Nice!"), SAY_SHOUT, 1000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {director.gear, loc("Now use it and go to the moon PAotH station to get more fuel!"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000}})
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog03, Skipanim, {dialog03})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimWait, args = {guard1.gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimCaption, args = {guard1.gear, loc("Prepare to flee!"),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {guard1.gear, loc("Hey").." "..guard2.name.."! "..loc("Look, someone is stealing the saucer!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {guard1.gear, string.format(loc("Hey, %s! Look, someone is stealing the saucer!"), guard2.name), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {guard2.gear, loc("I'll get him!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = startCombat, args = {guard1.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 04 - Hero out of sight
@@ -558,24 +558,24 @@
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 05 - Hero returned from moon without fuels
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog05, Skipanim, {dialog05})
-	table.insert(dialog05, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I guess I can't go far without fuels!"), SAY_THINK, 6000}})
-	table.insert(dialog05, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Go to go back"), SAY_THINK, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog05, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I guess I can't go far without fuel!"), SAY_THINK, 6000}})
+	table.insert(dialog05, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Got to go back."), SAY_THINK, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog05, {func = sendStatsOnRetry, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 06 - Landing on wrong planet or on earth if not enough fuels
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog06, Skipanim, {dialog06})
 	table.insert(dialog06, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You have to try again!"),  5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog06, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hm... Now I ran out of fuel..."), SAY_THINK, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog06, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hm ... Now I ran out of fuel."), SAY_THINK, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog06, {func = sendStatsOnRetry, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 07 - Hero lands on Death Planet but isn't allowed yet to play this map
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog07, Skipanim, {dialog07})
 	table.insert(dialog07, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("This planet seems dangerous!"),  5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog07, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I am not ready for this planet yet. I should visit it when I have found all the other device parts"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog07, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I am not ready for this planet yet. I should visit it when I have found all the other device parts."), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	-- DIALOG 08 - Hero wins death01
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog08, Skipanim, {dialog08})
-	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Under the meteorite shadow..."),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("You did great Hog Solo! However we aren't out of danger yet!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4500}})
-	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("The meteorite has come too close and the anti-gravity device isn't powerful enough to stop it now"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("We need it to get split into at least two parts"), SAY_SHOUT, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Under the meteorites shadow ..."),  4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("You did great, Hog Solo! However, we aren't out of danger yet!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4500}})
+	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("The meteorite has come too close and the anti-gravity device isn't powerful enough to stop it now."), SAY_SHOUT, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("We need it to get split into at least two parts."), SAY_SHOUT, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("PAotH has sent explosives but unfortunately the trigger mechanism seems to be faulty!"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimSay, args = {doctor.gear, loc("We need you to go there and detonate them yourself! Good luck!"), SAY_SHOUT, 500}})
 	table.insert(dialog08, {func = AnimWait, args = {doctor.gear, 3000}})
@@ -590,20 +590,20 @@
 	TurnTimeLeft = 0
 end
 
-function sendStats(planet)
-	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo arrived at "..planet))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Return to the mission menu by pressing the \"Go back\" button"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can choose another planet by replaying this mission"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Planets with completed main missions will be marked with a flower"))
+function sendStats(planetMsg)
+	SendStat(siGameResult, planetMsg)
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Return to the mission menu by pressing the \"Go back\" button."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can choose another planet by replaying this mission."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Planets with completed main missions will be marked with a flower."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
 
 function sendStatsOnRetry()
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("You have to travel again"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Your first destination is the moon in order to get more fuel"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to complete the main mission on moon in order to travel to other planets"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to be careful and not die!"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Your first destination is the moon in order to get more fuel."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to complete the main mission on moon in order to travel to other planets."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to be careful and must not die!"))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -44,17 +44,17 @@
 local teamB = {}
 local teamC = {}
 -- hedgehogs values
-hero.name = "Hog Solo"
+hero.name = loc("Hog Solo")
 hero.x = 520
 hero.y = 845
 hero.dead = false
-paoth1.name = "H"
+paoth1.name = loc("H")
 paoth1.x = 3730
 paoth1.y = 1480
-paoth2.name = "Dr.Cornelius"
+paoth2.name = loc("Dr. Cornelius")
 paoth2.x = 3800
 paoth2.y = 1480
-professor.name = "Prof. Hogevil"
+professor.name = loc("Prof. Hogevil")
 professor.dead = false
 thug1.x = 1265
 thug1.y = 1400
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 	HogTurnLeft(professor.bot, true)
 	professor.gear = professor.bot
 	for i=1,table.getn(thugs) do
-		thugs[i].gear = AddHog(loc("thug").." #"..i, 1, thugs[i].health, "war_desertgrenadier1")
+		thugs[i].gear = AddHog(string.format(loc("Thug #%d"), i), 1, thugs[i].health, "war_desertgrenadier1")
 		AnimSetGearPosition(thugs[i].gear, thugs[i].x, thugs[i].y)
 		HogTurnLeft(thugs[i].gear, not thugs[i].turnLeft)
 	end
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to eliminate all your enemies"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to eliminate all your enemies."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -274,10 +274,10 @@
 function enemiesDeath(gear)
 	saveCompletedStatus(6)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have successfully eliminated Professor Hogevil"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have rescued H and Dr.Cornelius"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have acquired the last device part"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Now go and play the menu mission to complete the campaign"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have successfully eliminated Professor Hogevil."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have rescued H and Dr. Cornelius."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have acquired the last device part."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Now go and play the menu mission to complete the campaign."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -296,11 +296,11 @@
 	-- DIALOG01, GAME START, INTRODUCTION
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere in the uninhabitable Death Planet..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere on the uninhabitable Death Planet ..."), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("Welcome Hog Solo, surprised to see me?"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("As you can see I have survived our last encounter and I had time to plot my master plan!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("I've thought that the best way to get the device is to let you collect most of the parts for me!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("So, now I got the last part and I have your friends captured..."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("So, now I got the last part and I have your friends captured."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.human, loc("Will you give me the other parts?"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I will never hand you the parts!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death02.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/death02.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -10,19 +10,19 @@
 ----------------- VARIABLES --------------------
 -- globals
 local missionName = loc("Killing the specialists")
-local challengeObjectives = loc("Use your available weapons in order to eliminate the enemies").."|"..
-	loc("Each time you play this missions enemy hogs will play in a random order").."|"..
-	loc("At the start of the game each enemy hog has only the weapon that he is named after").."|"..
-	loc("A random hedgehog will inherit the weapons of his deceased team-mates").."|"..
-	loc("If you kill a hedgehog with the respective weapon your health points will be set to 100").."|"..
-	loc("If you injure a hedgehog you'll get 35% of the damage dealt").."|"..
-	loc("Every time you kill an enemy hog your ammo will get reset").."|"..
-	loc("Rope won't get reset")
+local challengeObjectives = loc("Use your available weapons in order to eliminate the enemies.").."|"..
+	loc("Each time you play this missions enemy hogs will play in a random order.").."|"..
+	loc("At the start of the game each enemy hog has only the weapon that he is named after.").."|"..
+	loc("A random hedgehog will inherit the weapons of his deceased team-mates.").."|"..
+	loc("If you kill a hedgehog with the respective weapon your health points will be set to 100.").."|"..
+	loc("If you injure a hedgehog you'll get 35% of the damage dealt.").."|"..
+	loc("Every time you kill an enemy hog your ammo will get reset.").."|"..
+	loc("The rope won't get reset.")
 -- dialogs
 local dialog01 = {}
 -- mission objectives
 local goals = {
-	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
+	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
 }
 -- hogs
 local hero = {
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 	color = tonumber("38D61C",16) -- green
 }
 local teamB = {
-	name = loc("5 deadly hogs"),
+	name = loc("5 Deadly Hogs"),
 	color = tonumber("FF0000",16) -- red
 }
 
@@ -177,8 +177,8 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the enemies"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the Challenge Objectives from within the mission for more details"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the enemies."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the challenge objectives from within the mission for more details."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamB.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -187,8 +187,8 @@
 function heroWin(gear)
 	saveBonus(3, 4)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You complete the mission in "..TotalRounds.." rounds"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The next 4 times you play the \"The last encounter\" mission you'll get 20 more hit points and a Laser Sight"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("You completed the mission in %d rounds."), TotalRounds))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The next 4 times you play the \"The last encounter\" mission you'll get 20 more hit points and a laser sight."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
@@ -206,8 +206,8 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, game instructions
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere in the Planet of Death..."), 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("...Hog Solo fights for his life"), 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere on the Planet of Death ..."), 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("... Hog Solo fights for his life"), 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Each time you play this missions enemy hogs will play in a random order"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("At the start of the game each enemy hog has only the weapon that he is named after"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("A random hedgehog will inherit the weapons of his deceased team-mates"), 5000}})
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@
 end
 
 function heroFleeFirstBattle(gear)
-	AnimSay(smuggler1.gear, loc("Run away you coward!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
+	AnimSay(smuggler1.gear, loc("Run away, you coward!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
 	TurnTimeLeft = 0
 	heroIsInBattle = false
 	ongoingBattle = 0
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@
 function heroAtThirdBattle(gear)
 	heroIsInBattle = true
 	ongoingBattle = 3
-	AnimSay(smuggler3.gear, loc("Who's there?! I'll get you..."), SAY_SHOUT, 5000)
+	AnimSay(smuggler3.gear, loc("Who's there?! I'll get you!"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000)
 	AnimSwitchHog(smuggler3.gear)
 	TurnTimeLeft = 0
 end
@@ -479,22 +479,22 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, getting info about the device
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("In the Planet of Sand, you have to double check your moves..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Finally you are here..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the Planet of Sand, you have to double check your moves ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Finally you are here!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Thank you for meeting me on such a short notice!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {ally.gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("No problem, I would do anything for H!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Now listen carefully! Below us there are tunnels that have been created naturally over the years"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("I have heard that the local tribes say that many years ago some PAotH scientists were dumping their waste here"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("H confirmed that there isn't such a PAotH activity logged"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("So, I believe that it's a good place to start"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Beware though! Many smugglers come often to explore these tunnels and scavenge whatever valuable items they can find"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("I have heard that the local tribes say that many years ago some PAotH scientists were dumping their waste here."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("H confirmed that there isn't such a PAotH activity logged."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("So, I believe that it's a good place to start."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Beware, though! Many smugglers come often to explore these tunnels and scavenge whatever valuable items they can find."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("They won't hesitate to attack you in order to rob you!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 6000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("OK, I'll be extra careful!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Okay, I'll be extra careful!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {ally.gear, 2000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("There is the tunnel entrance"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("The tunnel entrance is over there."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Good luck!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = startMission, args = {hero.gear}})
@@ -510,11 +510,11 @@
 function secondBattle()
 	-- second battle
 	if heroIsInBattle and ongoingBattle == 1 then
-		AnimSay(smuggler1.gear, loc("Get him Spike!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
+		AnimSay(smuggler1.gear, loc("Get him, Spike!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000)
 	end
 	heroIsInBattle = true
 	ongoingBattle = 2
-	AnimSay(smuggler2.gear, loc("This is seems like a wealthy hedgehog, nice..."), SAY_THINK, 5000)
+	AnimSay(smuggler2.gear, loc("This is seems like a wealthy hedgehog, nice ..."), SAY_THINK, 5000)
 	AnimSwitchHog(smuggler2.gear)
 	TurnTimeLeft = 0
 end
@@ -551,14 +551,14 @@
 function checkForWin()
 	if cratesFound ==  0 then
 		-- have to look more
-		AnimSay(hero.gear, loc("Haven't found it yet..."), SAY_THINK, 5000)
+		AnimSay(hero.gear, loc("Haven't found it yet ..."), SAY_THINK, 5000)
 		cratesFound = cratesFound + 1
 	elseif cratesFound == 1 then
 		-- end game
 		saveCompletedStatus(5)
-		AnimSay(hero.gear, loc("Hoorah!!!"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000)
+		AnimSay(hero.gear, loc("Hooray!"), SAY_SHOUT, 5000)
 		SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you had to collect the 2 crates with no specific order"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you had to collect the 2 crates with no specific order."))
 		SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 		SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamB.name)
 		EndGame()
@@ -567,9 +567,9 @@
 
 function lose()
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to find the right crate"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can avoid some battles"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use your ammo wisely"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to find the right crate."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can avoid some battles."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use your ammo wisely."))
 	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Don't destroy the device crate!"))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamB.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert02.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert02.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -144,17 +144,17 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to go to the surface"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most mines are not active"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("From the second turn and beyond the water rises"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to go to the surface."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most mines are not active."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("From the second turn and beyond the water rises."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
 
 function heroSafe(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have escaped successfully"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Your escape took you "..TotalRounds.." turns"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have escaped successfully."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("Your escape took you %d turns."), TotalRounds))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
@@ -172,9 +172,9 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Many meters below the surface..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("The tunnel is about to get flooded..."), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I have to reach the surface as quickly as I can..."), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Many meters below the surface ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("The tunnel is about to get flooded!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I have to reach the surface as quickly as I can."), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = challengeStart, args = {hero.gear}})
 end
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert03.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/desert03.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 local dialog01 = {}
 -- mission objectives
 local goals = {
-	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
+	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
 }
 -- hogs
 local hero = {
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 function onGameStart()
 	AnimWait(hero.gear, 3000)
 	FollowGear(hero.gear)
-	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
+	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
 
 	AddEvent(onHeroDeath, {hero.gear}, heroDeath, {hero.gear}, 0)
 	AddEvent(onLose, {hero.gear}, lose, {hero.gear}, 0)
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, game instructions
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the Desert Planet, Hog Solo found some time to play with his RC plane..."), 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the Desert Planet, Hog Solo found some time to play with his RC plane"), 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Each time you destroy all the targets on your current level you'll get teleported to the next level"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll have only one RC plane at the start of the mission"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("During the game you can get new RC planes by collecting the weapon crates"), 5000}})
@@ -209,18 +209,18 @@
 function win()
 	saveBonus(1, 1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you are the best!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have destroyed all the targets"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You are indeed the best PAotH pilot"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Next time you play \"Searching in the dust\" you'll have an RC plane available"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have destroyed all the targets."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You are indeed the best PAotH pilot."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Next time you play \"Searching in the dust\" you'll have an RC plane available."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
 
 function gameOver()
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to destroy all the targets"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will fail if you run out of ammo and there are still targets available"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the Challenge Objectives from within the mission for more details"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to destroy all the targets."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will fail if you run out of ammo and there are still targets available."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the challenge objectives from within the mission for more details."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/final.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/final.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 local missionName = loc("The big bang")
 local challengeObjectives = loc("Find a way to detonate all the explosives and stay alive!").."|"..
 							loc("Red areas are indestructible").."|"..
-							loc("Green areas aren't portal enabled")
+							loc("Green areas are portal-proof")
 local explosives = {}
 local currentHealth = 1
 local currentDamage = 0
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 function onGameStart()
 	AnimWait(hero.gear, 3000)
 	FollowGear(hero.gear)
-	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
+	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
 
 	-- explosives
 	x = 400
@@ -143,8 +143,8 @@
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
 	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to destroy all the explosives without dying!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Red areas are indestructible"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Green areas aren't portal enabled"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Red areas are indestructible."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Green areas are portal-proof and repel portals."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@
 local dialog03 = {}
 -- mission objectives
 local goals = {
-	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Ready for Battle?"), loc("Walk left if you want to join Captain Lime or right if you want to decline his offer"), 1, 4000},
-	[dialog02] = {missionName, loc("Battle Starts Now!"), loc("You have chosen to fight! Lead the Green Bananas to battle and eliminate all the enemies"), 1, 4000},
-	[dialog03] = {missionName, loc("Time to run!"), loc("You have chosen to flee... Unfortunately the only place where you can launch your saucer is the left-most place on the map"), 1, 4000},
+	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Ready for Battle?"), loc("Walk left if you want to join Captain Lime or right if you want to decline his offer."), 1, 4000},
+	[dialog02] = {missionName, loc("Battle Starts Now!"), loc("You have chosen to fight! Lead the Green Bananas to battle and eliminate all the enemies!"), 1, 4000},
+	[dialog03] = {missionName, loc("Time to run!"), loc("You have chosen to flee ... Unfortunately, the only place where you can launch your saucer is the left-most place on the map."), 1, 4000},
 }
 -- crates
 local crateWMX = 2170
@@ -387,42 +387,42 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, Captain Lime talks explains to Hog Solo
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere on the Planet of Fruits a terrible war is about to begin..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere on the Planet of Fruits a terrible war is about to begin ..."), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I was told that as the leader of the king's guard, no one knows this world better than you!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("So, I kindly ask for your help"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("So, I kindly ask for your help."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 2000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You couldn't have come to a worse time Hog Solo!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("The clan of the Red Strawberry wants to take over the dominion and overthrone king Pineapple."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Under normal circumstances we could easily defeat them but we have kindly sent most of our men to the kingdom of Sand to help to the annual dusting of the king's palace."), SAY_SAY, 8000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("However the army of Yellow Watermelons is about to attack any moment now."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You couldn't have come to a worse time, Hog Solo!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("The clan of the Red Strawberry wants to take over the dominion and overthrow King Pineapple."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Under normal circumstances we could easily defeat them but we have kindly sent most of our men to the Kingdom of Sand to help with the annual dusting of the king's palace."), SAY_SAY, 8000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("However, the army of Yellow Watermelons is about to attack any moment now."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I would gladly help you if we won this battle but under these circumstances I'll only help you if you fight for our side."), SAY_SAY, 6000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("What do you say? Will you fight for us?"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = ShowMission, args = {missionName, loc("Ready for Battle?"), loc("Walk left if you want to join Captain Lime or right if you want to decline his offer"), 1, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = ShowMission, args = {missionName, loc("Ready for Battle?"), loc("Walk left if you want to join Captain Lime or right if you want to decline his offer."), 1, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - Hero selects to fight
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You choose well Hog Solo!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I have only 3 hogs available and they are all cadets"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("As you are more experienced, I want you to lead them to the battle"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I of course will observe the battle and intervene if necessary"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You choose well, Hog Solo!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I have only 3 hogs available and they are all cadets."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("As you are more experienced, I want you to lead them to battle."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Of course, I will observe the battle and intervene if necessary."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 4500}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No problem Captain!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No problem, Captain!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("The enemies aren't many anyway, it is going to be easy!"), SAY_SAY, 1}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 9000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Don't be foolish son, there will be more"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Don't be foolish, son, there will be more."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Try to be smart and eliminate them quickly. This way you might scare off the rest!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = startBattle, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 03 - Hero selects to flee
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog03, Skipanim, {dialog03})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Too bad... Then you should really leave!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Things are going to get messy around here"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Also, you should know that the only place where you can fly is the left-most part of this area"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("All the other places are protected by our flight-inhibiting weapons"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Now go and don't waste more of my time you coward..."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Too bad! Then you should really leave!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Things are going to get messy around here."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Also, you should know that the only place where you can fly is the left-most part of this area."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("All the other places are protected by our flight-inhibiting weapons."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Now go and don't waste more of my time, you coward!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = startBattle, args = {hero.gear}})
 end
@@ -447,16 +447,16 @@
 function gameLost()
 	if chooseToBattle then
 		SendStat(siGameResult, loc("The Green Bananas lost, try again!"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the visible enemies"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("5 additional enemies will be spawned during the game"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You are in control of all the active ally units"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The ally units share their ammo"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Try to keep as many allies alive as possible"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the visible enemies."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("5 additional enemies will be spawned during the game."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You are in control of all the active ally units."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The ally units share their ammo."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Try to keep as many allies alive as possible."))
 	else
 		SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo couldn't escape, try again!"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get to the left-most land and remove any enemy hog from there"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will play every 3 turns"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Green hogs won't intentionally hurt you"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get to the left-most land and remove any enemy hog from there."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will play every 3 turns."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Green hogs won't intentionally hurt you."))
 	end
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit02.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit02.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -398,13 +398,13 @@
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	if not ended then
 		SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game, Hog Solo has to get the bottom crates and come back to the surface"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can use the other 2 hogs to assist you"))
-		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Do not destroy the crates"))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game, Hog Solo has to get the bottom crates and come back to the surface."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You can use the other 2 hogs to assist you."))
+		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Do not destroy the crates!"))
 		if tookPartInBattle then
-			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll have to eliminate the Strawberry Assassins at the end"))
+			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll have to eliminate the Strawberry Assassins at the end."))
 		else
-			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll have to eliminate Captain Lime at the end"))
+			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll have to eliminate Captain Lime at the end."))
 		SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Don't eliminate Captain Lime before collecting the last crate!"))
 		end
 		SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
@@ -455,8 +455,8 @@
 	-- hero win in scenario of escape in 1st part
 	saveCompletedStatus(3)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You retrieved the lost part"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You defended yourself against Captain Lime"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You retrieved the lost part."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You defended yourself against Captain Lime."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamB.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -466,8 +466,8 @@
 	-- hero win in battle scenario
 	saveCompletedStatus(3)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You retrieved the lost part"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You defended yourself against Strawberry Assassins"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You retrieved the lost part."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You defended yourself against the Strawberry Assassins."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, Captain Lime helps Hog Solo because he took part in the battle
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere else on the planet of fruits Captain Lime helps Hog Solo..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere else on the planet of fruits, Captain Lime helps Hog Solo"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You fought bravely and you helped us win this battle!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("So, as promised I have brought you where I think that the device you are looking for is hidden."), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I know that your resources are low due to the battle but I'll send two of my best hogs to assist you."), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
@@ -512,23 +512,23 @@
 	-- DIALOG02 - Start, Hog Solo escaped from the previous battle
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere else on the planet of fruits Hog Solo gets closer to the device..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You are the one who fled! So, you are alive..."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I'm still low on hogs. If you are not afraid I could use a set of extra hands"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere else on the planet of fruits Hog Solo gets closer to the device"), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("You are the one who fled! So, you are alive."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("I'm still low on hogs. If you are not afraid I could use a set of extra hands."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 8000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I am sorry but I was looking for a device that may be hidden somewhere around here"), SAY_SAY, 4500}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I am sorry but I was looking for a device that may be hidden somewhere around here."), SAY_SAY, 4500}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 12500}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("Many long forgotten things can be found in the same tunnels that we are about to explore!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("If you help us you can keep the device if you find it but we'll keep everything else"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("If you help us you can keep the device if you find it but we'll keep everything else."), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("What do you say? Are you in?"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 1800}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Ok then!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Okay then!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG03 - At crates, hero learns that Captain Lime is bad
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog03, Skipanim, {dialog03})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = FollowGear, args = {hero.gear}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hoorah! I've found it, now I have to get back to Captain Lime!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hooray! I've found it, now I have to get back to Captain Lime!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimWait, args = {green1.gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {green1.gear, loc("This Hog Solo is so naive! When he returns I'll shoot him and keep that device for myself!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = goToThesurface, args = {hero.gear}})
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog04, Skipanim, {dialog04})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = FollowGear, args = {hero.gear}})
-	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hoorah! I've found it, now I have to get back to Captain Lime!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hooray! I've found it, now I have to get back to Captain Lime!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimWait, args = {redHedgehogs[1].gear, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {redHedgehogs[1].gear, loc("We have spotted the enemy! We'll attack when the enemies start gathering!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = goToThesurface, args = {hero.gear}})
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit03.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/fruit03.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@
 local missionName = loc("Precise shooting")
 local timeLeft = 10000
 local lastWeaponUsed = amSniperRifle
-local challengeObjectives = loc("Use your available weapons in order to eliminate the enemies").."|"..
-	loc("You can only use the Sniper Rifle or the Watermelon bomb").."|"..
-	loc("You'll have only 2 watermelon bombs during the game").."|"..
-	loc("You'll get an extra Sniper Rifle every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 4 rifles").."|"..
-	loc("You'll get an extra Teleport every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 2 teleports").."|"..
-	loc("The first turn will last 25 sec and every other turn 15 sec").."|"..
-	loc("If you skip a turn then the turn time left will be added to your next turn").."|"..
-	loc("Some parts of the land are indestructible")
+local challengeObjectives = loc("Use your available weapons in order to eliminate the enemies.").."|"..
+	loc("You can only use the sniper rifle or the watermelon bomb.").."|"..
+	loc("You'll have only 2 watermelon bombs during the game.").."|"..
+	loc("You'll get an extra sniper rifle every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 4 rifles.").."|"..
+	loc("You'll get an extra teleport every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 2 teleports.").."|"..
+	loc("The first turn will last 25 sec and every other turn 15 sec.").."|"..
+	loc("If you skip a turn then the turn time left will be added to your next turn.").."|"..
+	loc("Some parts of the land are indestructible.")
 -- dialogs
 local dialog01 = {}
 -- mission objectives
 local goals = {
-	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
+	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
 }
 -- hogs
 local hero = {
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 function onGameStart()
 	AnimWait(hero.gear, 3000)
 	FollowGear(hero.gear)
-	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
+	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
 
 	AddEvent(onHeroDeath, {hero.gear}, heroDeath, {hero.gear}, 0)
 	AddEvent(onHeroWin, {hero.gear}, heroWin, {hero.gear}, 0)
@@ -203,8 +203,8 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the enemies"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the Challenge Objectives from within the mission for more details"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to eliminate all the enemies."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Read the challenge objectives from within the mission for more details."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamB.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -213,8 +213,8 @@
 function heroWin(gear)
 	saveBonus(2, 1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You complete the mission in "..TotalRounds.." rounds"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will gain some extra ammo from the crates the next time you play the \"Getting to the device\" mission"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("You completed the mission in %d rounds."), TotalRounds))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You will gain some extra ammo from the crates the next time you play the \"Getting to the device\" mission."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
@@ -232,13 +232,13 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, game instructions
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere in the Fruit Planet Hog Solo got lost..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("...and got ambushed by the Red Strawberries"), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Somewhere in the Fruit Planet Hog Solo got lost ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("... and got ambushed by the Red Strawberries"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Use your available weapons in order to eliminate the enemies"), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You can only use the Sniper Rifle or the Watermelon bomb"), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You can only use the sniper rifle or the watermelon bomb"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll have only 2 watermelon bombs during the game"), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll get an extra Sniper Rifle every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 4 rifles"), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll get an extra Teleport every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 2 teleports"), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll get an extra sniper rifle every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 4 rifles"), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("You'll get an extra teleport every time you kill an enemy hog with a limit of max 2 teleports"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("The first turn will last 25 sec and every other turn 15 sec"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("If you skip the game your time left will be added to your next turn"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Some parts of the land are indestructible"), 5000}})
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -428,9 +428,9 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to go next to Thanta"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most of the time you'll be able to use only the icegun"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use the bazooka and the flying saucer to get the icegun"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to stand next to Thanta."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most of the time you'll be able to use the icegun only."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use the bazooka and the flying saucer to get the icegun."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamB.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -454,10 +454,10 @@
 
 function thantaDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Noooo, Thanta has to stay alive!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to go next to Thanta"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most of the time you'll be able to use only the icegun"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use the bazooka and the flying saucer to get the icegun"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Noo, Thanta has to stay alive!"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to go next to Thanta."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Most of the time you'll be able to use the icegun only."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use the bazooka and the flying saucer to get the icegun."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamB.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -490,29 +490,29 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, welcome to moon
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the Ice Planet, where ice rules..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Finally you are here..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the Ice Planet, where ice rules ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Finally you are here!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 2000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hi! Nice to meet you"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Hi! Nice to meet you."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {ally.gear, 2000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Listen carefully! The bandit leader, Thanta, has recently found a very strange device"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("He doesn't know it but this device is a part of the anti-gravity device"), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Listen carefully! The bandit leader, Thanta, has recently found a very strange device."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("He doesn't know it but this device is a part of the anti-gravity device."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 8000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Nice, then I should get the part as soon as possible!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {ally.gear, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Be careful, your gadgets won't work in the bandit area. You should get an ice gun"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Be careful, your gadgets won't work in the bandit area. You should get an ice gun."), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("There is one below us!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - Hero got to Thant2
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Congratulations, now you can take Thanta's device part..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Congratulations, now you can take Thanta's device part!"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {bandit1.gear, loc("Oh! Please spare me. You can take all my treasures!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I just want the strange device you found!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {bandit1.gear, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {bandit1.gear, loc("Here! Take it..."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {bandit1.gear, loc("Here! Take it!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = actionsOnWin, args = {}})
 end
 
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
 function actionsOnWin()
 	saveCompletedStatus(4)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you acquired the device part!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("At the end of the game your health was ")..GetHealth(hero.gear))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("At the end of the game your health was %d."), GetHealth(hero.gear)))
 	-- maybe add number of tries for each part?
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamB.name)
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice02.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/ice02.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 local challengeObjectives = loc("To win the game you have to pass into the rings in time")..
 	"|"..loc("You'll get extra time in case you need it when you pass a ring").."|"..
 	loc("Every 2 rings, the ring color will be green and you'll get an extra flying saucer").."|"..
-	loc("Use space button twice to change flying saucer while floating in mid-air")
+	loc("Use the attack key twice to change the flying saucer while floating in mid-air")
 -- dialogs
 local dialog01 = {}
 -- mission objectives
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
 function onGameStart()
 	AnimWait(hero.gear, 3000)
 	FollowGear(hero.gear)
-	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
+	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
 
 	AddEvent(onHeroDeath, {hero.gear}, heroDeath, {hero.gear}, 0)
 
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@
 			totalTime = totalTime / 1000
 			local saucersLeft = GetAmmoCount(hero.gear, amJetpack)
 			local saucersUsed = totalSaucers - saucersLeft
-			SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hoorah! You are a champion!"))
-			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You completed the mission in "..totalTime.." seconds"))
-			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have used "..saucersUsed.." flying saucers"))
-			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You had "..saucersLeft.." more flying saucers left"))
+			SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hooray! You are a champion!"))
+			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("You completed the mission in %.3f seconds.", totalTime)))
+			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("You have used %d flying saucers.", saucersUsed)))
+			SendStat(siCustomAchievement, string.format(loc("You had %d additional flying saucers left"), saucersLeft))
 			SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 			EndGame()
 		end
@@ -188,13 +188,13 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, some story telling
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("In the Ice Planet flying saucer stadium..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("This is the Olympic stadium of saucer flying..."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("In the Ice Planet Flying Saucer Stadium ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("This is the Olympic stadium of saucer flying."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("All the saucer pilots dream to come here one day in order to compete with the best!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Now you have the chance to try and claim the place that you deserve among the best..."), SAY_SAY, 6000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Use the saucer and pass through the rings..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Now you have the chance to try and claim the place that you deserve among the best."), SAY_SAY, 6000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Use the saucer and pass through the rings."), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Pause the game by pressing the pause key (default \"P\") for more details"), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("... can you do it?"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {ally.gear, loc("Can you do it?"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = startFlying, args = {hero.gear}})
 end
@@ -260,10 +260,10 @@
 
 function heroLost()
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Oh man! Learn how to fly!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to pass into the rings in time"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll get extra time in case you need it when you pass a ring"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Every 2 rings you'll get extra flying saucers"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use space button twice to change flying saucer while being on air"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("To win the game you have to pass into the rings in time."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll get extra time in case you need it when you pass a ring."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Every 2 rings you'll get extra flying saucers."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Use the attack key twice to change the flying saucer while being in air."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get the weapons and rescue the PAotH researchers"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get the weapons and rescue the PAotH researchers."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamD.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
 
 function professorHit(gear)
 	if currentHedgehog ~= hero.gear then
-		AnimSay(professor.gear,loc("Don't hit me you fools!"), SAY_SHOUT, 2000)
+		AnimSay(professor.gear,loc("Don't hit me, you fools!"), SAY_SHOUT, 2000)
 	end
 end
 
@@ -366,8 +366,8 @@
 
 	saveCompletedStatus(1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo wins, congratulations!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Eliminated the Professor Hogevil"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Drove the minions away"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have eliminated Professor Hogevil."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You drove the minions away."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamD.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	SaveCampaignVar("CosmosCheckPoint", "5") -- hero got fuels
@@ -383,8 +383,8 @@
 
 	saveCompletedStatus(1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Eliminated the evil minions"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Drove the Professor away"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have eliminated the evil minions."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You drove Professor Hogevil away."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamD.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	SaveCampaignVar("CosmosCheckPoint", "5") -- hero got fuels
@@ -410,36 +410,36 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, welcome to moon
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near PAotH base at moon..."),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Hey Hog Solo! Finally you have come..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near a PAotH base on the moon ..."),  4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Hey, Hog Solo! Finally you have come!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("It seems that Professor Hogevil has prepared for your arrival!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("He has captured the rest of the PAotH team and awaits to capture you!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("We have to hurry! Are you armed?"), SAY_SAY, 4300}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 450}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No, I am afraid I had to travel light"), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No, I am afraid I had to travel light."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {paoth1.gear, 3200}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Ok, then you have to go and take some of the weapons we have hidden in case of an emergency!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Okay, then you have to go and take some of the weapons we have hidden in case of an emergency!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("They are up there! Take this rope and hurry!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Ehm... ok..."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Ehm, okay ..."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - To the weapons platform
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Checkpoint reached!"),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I've made it! YEAAAAAH!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I've made it! Yeah!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Nice! Now hurry and get down! You have to rescue my friends!"), SAY_SHOUT, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = setAfterDialog02, args = {}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 03 - Hero spotted and has no weapons
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog03, Skipanim, {dialog03})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Get ready to fight!"), 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look, boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.gear, loc("Prepare for battle!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Oops, I've been spotted and I have no weapons! I am doomed!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = startCombat, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 04 - Hero spotted and *HAS* weapons
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog04, Skipanim, {dialog04})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Get ready to fight!"), 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look, boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.gear, loc("Prepare for battle!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Here we go!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = startCombat, args = {hero.gear}})
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon02.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon02.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 local dialog02 = {}
 -- mission objectives
 local goals = {
-	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
+	[dialog01] = {missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, 1, 4500},
 }
 -- hogs
 local hero = {
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 function onGameStart()
 	AnimWait(hero.gear, 3000)
 	FollowGear(hero.gear)
-	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge Objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
+	ShowMission(missionName, loc("Challenge objectives"), challengeObjectives, -amSkip, 0)
 
 	AddEvent(onHeroDeath, {hero.gear}, heroDeath, {hero.gear}, 0)
 
@@ -158,10 +158,10 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, game instructions
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3200}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the other side of the moon..."), 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("So you are interested in Professor Hogevil"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("We'll play a game first"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("I'll let you know whatever I know about him if you manage to catch me 3 times"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("On the other side of the moon ..."), 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("So you are interested in Professor Hogevil, huh?"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("We'll play a game first."), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("I'll let you know whatever I know about him if you manage to catch me 3 times."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("Let's go!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = moveRunner, args = {}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - Hog Solo story
@@ -169,14 +169,14 @@
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3200}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("The truth about Professor Hogevil"), 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("Amazing! I was never beaten in a race before!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("So, let me tell you what I know about Professor Hogevil..."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("Professor Hogevil, then known as James Hogus, worked for PAotH back in my time"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("He was the lab assistant of Dr. Goodhogan, the inventor of the anti-gravity device"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("During the final testing of the device an accident happened"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("In this accident Professor Hogevil lost all his spines on his head!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("That's why he always wears a hat since then"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("After that incident he went underground and started working on his plan to steal the device"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("He is a very tough and very determined hedgehog. I would be extremely careful if I were you"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("So, let me tell you what I know about Professor Hogevil."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("Professor Hogevil, then known as James Hogus, worked for PAotH back in my time."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("He was the lab assistant of Dr. Goodhogan, the inventor of the anti-gravity device."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("During the final testing of the device an accident happened."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("In this accident, Professor Hogevil lost all his spines on his head!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("That's why he always wears a hat since then."), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("After that incident he went underground and started working on his plan to steal the device."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("He is a very tough and very determined hedgehog. I would be extremely careful if I were you."), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {runner.gear, loc("I should go now, goodbye!"), SAY_SAY, 3000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = win, args = {}})
 end
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@
 		if currentPosition ~= 1 then
 			PlaySound(sndVictory)
 			if currentPosition > 1 and currentPosition < 4 then
-				AnimCaption(hero.gear, loc("Go get him again"), 3000)
-				AnimSay(runner.gear, loc("You got me"), SAY_SAY, 3000)
+				AnimCaption(hero.gear, loc("Go, get him again!"), 3000)
+				AnimSay(runner.gear, loc("You got me!"), SAY_SAY, 3000)
 			end
 			previousTimeLeft = TurnTimeLeft
 		end
@@ -221,18 +221,18 @@
 end
 
 function lose()
-	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Too slow! Try again..."))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to catch the other hog 3 times"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The time that you have left when you reach the blue hedgehog will be added to the next turn"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Each turn you'll have only one rope to use"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll lose if you die or if your time is up"))
+	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Too slow! Try again ..."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to catch the other hog 3 times."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("The time that you have left when you reach the blue hedgehog will be added to the next turn."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Each turn you'll have only one rope to use."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You'll lose if you die or if your time is up."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end
 
 function win()
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you are the fastest!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have managed to catch the blue hedgehog in time"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have managed to catch the blue hedgehog in time."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamA.name)
 	EndGame()
 end