share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua
changeset 11697 68eddcdc9f26
parent 10290 42efccba0711
child 11980 c52d35c859e8
--- a/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua	Tue Apr 12 15:41:48 2016 -0400
+++ b/share/hedgewars/Data/Missions/Campaign/A_Space_Adventure/moon01.lua	Wed Apr 13 14:59:14 2016 +0200
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
 
 function heroDeath(gear)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo lost, try again!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get the weapons and rescue the PAotH researchers"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have to get the weapons and rescue the PAotH researchers."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamC.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamD.name)
 	EndGame()
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
 
 function professorHit(gear)
 	if currentHedgehog ~= hero.gear then
-		AnimSay(professor.gear,loc("Don't hit me you fools!"), SAY_SHOUT, 2000)
+		AnimSay(professor.gear,loc("Don't hit me, you fools!"), SAY_SHOUT, 2000)
 	end
 end
 
@@ -366,8 +366,8 @@
 
 	saveCompletedStatus(1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Hog Solo wins, congratulations!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Eliminated the Professor Hogevil"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Drove the minions away"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have eliminated Professor Hogevil."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You drove the minions away."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamD.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	SaveCampaignVar("CosmosCheckPoint", "5") -- hero got fuels
@@ -383,8 +383,8 @@
 
 	saveCompletedStatus(1)
 	SendStat(siGameResult, loc("Congratulations, you won!"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Eliminated the evil minions"))
-	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("Drove the Professor away"))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You have eliminated the evil minions."))
+	SendStat(siCustomAchievement, loc("You drove Professor Hogevil away."))
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'1',teamD.name)
 	SendStat(siPlayerKills,'0',teamC.name)
 	SaveCampaignVar("CosmosCheckPoint", "5") -- hero got fuels
@@ -410,36 +410,36 @@
 	-- DIALOG 01 - Start, welcome to moon
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog01, Skipanim, {dialog01})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 3000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near PAotH base at moon..."),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Hey Hog Solo! Finally you have come..."), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Near a PAotH base on the moon ..."),  4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Hey, Hog Solo! Finally you have come!"), SAY_SAY, 2000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("It seems that Professor Hogevil has prepared for your arrival!"), SAY_SAY, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("He has captured the rest of the PAotH team and awaits to capture you!"), SAY_SAY, 5000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("We have to hurry! Are you armed?"), SAY_SAY, 4300}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {hero.gear, 450}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No, I am afraid I had to travel light"), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("No, I am afraid I had to travel light."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimWait, args = {paoth1.gear, 3200}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Ok, then you have to go and take some of the weapons we have hidden in case of an emergency!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Okay, then you have to go and take some of the weapons we have hidden in case of an emergency!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("They are up there! Take this rope and hurry!"), SAY_SAY, 7000}})
-	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Ehm... ok..."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
+	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Ehm, okay ..."), SAY_SAY, 2500}})
 	table.insert(dialog01, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 02 - To the weapons platform
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog02, Skipanim, {dialog02})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Checkpoint reached!"),  4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I've made it! YEAAAAAH!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("I've made it! Yeah!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSay, args = {paoth1.gear, loc("Nice! Now hurry and get down! You have to rescue my friends!"), SAY_SHOUT, 7000}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = setAfterDialog02, args = {}})
 	table.insert(dialog02, {func = AnimSwitchHog, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 03 - Hero spotted and has no weapons
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog03, Skipanim, {dialog03})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Get ready to fight!"), 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look, boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.gear, loc("Prepare for battle!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Oops, I've been spotted and I have no weapons! I am doomed!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog03, {func = startCombat, args = {hero.gear}})
 	-- DIALOG 04 - Hero spotted and *HAS* weapons
 	AddSkipFunction(dialog04, Skipanim, {dialog04})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimCaption, args = {hero.gear, loc("Get ready to fight!"), 4000}})
-	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
+	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {minion1.gear, loc("Look, boss! There is the target!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {professor.gear, loc("Prepare for battle!"), SAY_SHOUT, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = AnimSay, args = {hero.gear, loc("Here we go!"), SAY_THINK, 4000}})
 	table.insert(dialog04, {func = startCombat, args = {hero.gear}})