Copy-editing.
authoralmikes@aol.com
Sun, 14 Dec 2014 18:34:32 +0000
changeset 493 300f6d2615ce
parent 492 25011ebab5ec
child 494 37952cd70b0d
Copy-editing.
BuildingOnLinux.wiki
--- a/BuildingOnLinux.wiki	Sun Dec 14 18:29:29 2014 +0000
+++ b/BuildingOnLinux.wiki	Sun Dec 14 18:34:32 2014 +0000
@@ -1,17 +1,18 @@
-#summary Instructions for building the development version of Hedgewars on Linux (debian focus)
+#summary Instructions for building the development version of Hedgewars on GNU/Linux (Debian focus)
 #labels Phase-Implementation,Phase-Deploy,Phase-Support
 
-= Introduction =
-
-This page contains Copy and Paste instructions for a Hedgewars development build.
-They should work on Debian and the like (Ubuntu, Mint).
-Required Packages for other distros should have similar names.
+= Building on GNU/Linux =
+== Introduction ==
 
-Please remember to copy the *entire* apt-get lines!
+This page contains copy-and-paste instructions for a Hedgewars development build.
+They should work on Debian and derivates (Ubuntu, Mint).
+Required packages for other distros should have similar names.
 
-Also, see http://hedgewars.org/download.html if you are just looking to play latest stable - there's a good chance it exists for your distro.
+Please remember to copy the _entire_ `apt-get` lines!
 
-= Prerequisites =
+Also, see http://hedgewars.org/download.html if you are just looking to play latest stable—there’s a good chance it exists for your distro.
+
+== Prerequisites ==
 
 {{{
 sudo apt-get install mercurial cmake g++ qt4-qmake libqt4-dev libsdl1.2-dev libsdl-net1.2-dev libsdl-mixer1.2-dev libsdl-image1.2-dev libsdl-ttf2.0-dev liblua5.1-dev fpc libphysfs-dev fonts-dejavu-core ttf-wqy-zenhei
@@ -29,7 +30,7 @@
 sudo apt-get install ghc libghc-binary-dev libghc-bytestring-show-dev libghc-dataenc-dev libghc-deepseq-dev libghc-hslogger-dev libghc-mtl-dev libghc-network-dev libghc-parsec3-dev libghc-utf8-string-dev libghc-vector-dev libghc-random-dev libghc-zlib-dev libghc-sha-dev libghc-entropy-dev
 }}}
 
-= Fetching the source code =
+== Fetching the source code ==
 
 Below you find instructions for downloading the Hedgewars source code from the development repository.
 
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@
 hg clone -v https://hedgewars.googlecode.com/hg/ trunk
 }}}
 
-The initial clone of the repository will take a while, is about 628MiB or so, due to all the multimedia revisions.
+The initial clone of the repository will take a while, is about 628 MiB or so, due to all the multimedia revisions.
 After that switch to the trunk folder:
 
 {{{
@@ -53,12 +54,12 @@
 {{{
 hg update 0.9.20
 }}}
-Note. Do *NOT* run the command above if you want to play the latest development code (currently 0.9.21-dev).
+Note. Do *not* run the command above if you want to play the latest development code (currently 0.9.21-dev).
 
 
-= Building process =
+== Building process ==
 
-Now let's configure and build!
+Now let’s configure and build!
 
 If you want to install Hedgewars *just for your user account* run
 {{{
@@ -72,21 +73,21 @@
 sudo make install
 }}}
 
-IMPORTANT: If you decided against png-screenshots or video-recording support, please append `-DNOPNG=1` and/or `-DNOVIDEOREC=1` to the cmake command line respectively!
+*Important*: If you decided against png-screenshots or video-recording support, please append `-DNOPNG=1` and/or `-DNOVIDEOREC=1` to the cmake command line respectively!
 
-if you want to build the server as well, change `-DNOSERVER=1` to `-DNOSERVER=0`
+If you want to build the server as well, change `-DNOSERVER=1` to `-DNOSERVER=0`
 
 
-then wait for the build to complete, then run ...
+then wait for the build to complete, then run …
 
 {{{
 ~/games/bin/hedgewars
 }}}
 or just {{{hedgewars}}} if you did a system-wide install.
 
-You can also create a launcher for it on your desktop or on applications menu if you wish, using the ~/games/bin/hedgewars path
+You can also create a launcher for it on your desktop or on applications menu if you wish, using the `$HOME/games/bin/hedgewars` path
 
-== Build latest development code repository updates ===
+== Build latest development code repository updates ==
 
 If you have built from your repository clone before and now you want to download more recent updates and rebuild Hedgewars with them, then run